Self Improvement Poetry posted August 13, 2010


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Uncomfortable in my own skin

by PUPA


When I didn’t

feel comfortable

inside my own skin

I decided to buy a new coat

believing it would fit me better

I

tried on many

some were too uptight

others selfish, arrogant

or ill tempered, just not right

 few were not too bad

but still not quite

good enough

so I felt

sad

I went home empty handed

except for the satisfaction I felt

when I slipped comfortably

into my old self again

thanking God for

my own domain

 




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Thank you Captain Terrible for the use of your interesting artwork "In my own skin".
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