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Easy words, but harder to keep
A chapter in the book Flash Fiction
A Promise From The Heart
by Begin Again
"Do you promise ..."
"I do!"
Visions of an angel filled his thoughts. The familiar face staring into his brown eyes was a pillar in his life. He couldn't imagine living without her. She'd been by his side for as long as he could remember, guiding and encouraging him.
The sunbeams filtered through the window, forming a halo around her head. He'd do anything to make her smile.
"You promise ..."
"I do! I do!"
Her arms wrapped around him, enfolding him with her love.
Swallowing hard, five-year-old Jack wailed, "I'm sorry, Mommy. I'll never tell a lie again."
She smiled. "Good little boys always keep their promises."
Micro Fiction contest entry
"Do you promise ..."
"I do!"
Visions of an angel filled his thoughts. The familiar face staring into his brown eyes was a pillar in his life. He couldn't imagine living without her. She'd been by his side for as long as he could remember, guiding and encouraging him.
The sunbeams filtered through the window, forming a halo around her head. He'd do anything to make her smile.
"You promise ..."
"I do! I do!"
Her arms wrapped around him, enfolding him with her love.
Swallowing hard, five-year-old Jack wailed, "I'm sorry, Mommy. I'll never tell a lie again."
She smiled. "Good little boys always keep their promises."
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Thank you MinoYasue for the lovely artwork.
Word Count- 108
Choose one only of the following prompts and write a flash fiction story of between 100 and 110 words. The story cannot be all dialogue; at least 10% narrative is required. The genre is your choice.
Prompts to choose from:
animal crackers
beautiful maidens
cuddly monsters
devious motives
empty promises
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and 2 member cents. Word Count- 108
Choose one only of the following prompts and write a flash fiction story of between 100 and 110 words. The story cannot be all dialogue; at least 10% narrative is required. The genre is your choice.
Prompts to choose from:
animal crackers
beautiful maidens
cuddly monsters
devious motives
empty promises
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