General Poetry posted June 27, 2010


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Inspired by Judian James's -The Meadow

Where Tranquility Lingers

by Helvi2


Thank you , Moonwillow for the perfect image



There's a place where tranquility lingers
Within lovely breathtaking views
From a word that was spoken or written
Expressing the thought of soft hues

In the calming cool waves of  emotion
Serenity blossoms and grows
As the heartbeat slows down to a flutter
And things problematic cease flow

In the midst of this lovely sensation
You'll drift on a gentle light breeze
As you sway in its gifts of enticements
It lulls tenderly to appease

In the place where tranquility lingers
One's spirit will be truly blessed
Soothing reflections are wonderful charms
One needs from a world that is stressed


 





While reviewing Judian James poem, "The Meadow" I wrote a line in which I said "this is where tranquility lingers". The thought I wrote became the inspiration for this poem.

I hope you enjoy
Helvi :o)
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