General Poetry posted October 1, 2009


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clarity poem (please see author notes)

Breeze

by whizpurr ^-^

BREEZE,
Current,
Air's soft kiss.

Whose eyes have witnessed
Source of zephyr's ebb and
Flow or knows winds come and go?

"Mysterious, unseen presence."



Write a Clarity Pyramid writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a Clarity Poem. A Clarity Pyramid is a poem consisting of two triplets and a single line (7 lines in all). See examples in the announcement.

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A clarity poem consists of 7 lines formed by 2 triplets and a single ending line. The first word is a single syllable word in caps, which is also the title.
The second line has 2 syllables which describe the title/subject and the third line has 3 syllables which describe the title/subject.
The 4th line has 5 syllables, the 6th line has 6 syllables and the 7th line has 7 syllables. This second triplet tells about a title/subject life event which lends a poetic outlook. In this case, this triplet explores the question that arises from the breeze's lively ebb and flow and come and go (its life event.)
The last line has 8 syllables. It is in quotation marks and makes a concluding remark/statement that describes the title/subject. Thanks RobRich for the use of your amazing and imaginative art.
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