General Poetry posted August 9, 2009


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A Toddler Tale

The Epitaph

by Janilou

Here lies the goldfish
Not quite the crunchy baked treat
our child had in mind



Just for Fun (5-7-5) writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Can you make 'em smile in only 17 syllables spread out in three lines of 5-7-5. No other rules apply! Don't worry about kigos, punctuation, concrete imagery etc. Do whatever works.
Example:

Don't eat yellow snow
It's not healthy as you know
Besides, it tastes bad!

This is just for fun, so be creative and let your imaginations run wild.


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Researching this on the internet, I learned that people eat goldfish. I'm not sure if I'm surprised or not!
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