Mystery and Crime Fiction posted July 29, 2009 |
A young boy settles the score
Deranged Justification
by Thesis
As the Crime Scene Investigators processed the scene, a boy with a shotgun approached. He looked at the Coroner in disbelief.
"What kind of monster would have the heart to disturb the beauty of my crime scene? I shot my family to death on purpose, no mistake.
I love how I posed them, wanting you to see what's left of these two hideous creatures, with only holes left where their faces once were.
I passed sentence on them for violating me as a child. No one ever knew how I hated the nightly visits. Somehow, now I think they know!"
"What kind of monster would have the heart to disturb the beauty of my crime scene? I shot my family to death on purpose, no mistake.
I love how I posed them, wanting you to see what's left of these two hideous creatures, with only holes left where their faces once were.
I passed sentence on them for violating me as a child. No one ever knew how I hated the nightly visits. Somehow, now I think they know!"
100 Word Story writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt Write a story that is between 100 and 150 words. The trick is you must use the following words: love - hate - heart - beauty - monster - death - family - creature - sentence - crime - scene - mistake. Words may be used in differet formats (for example: sentence, sentences or sentencing) |
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