General Fiction posted May 18, 2009


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Trying to save her house, Jill makes a mistake.

A Bad Decision

by Thesis

"Jill, got a minute to talk?"

"Not really, what's wrong?"

"I got a weird call from the bank. They said we're not in foreclosure anymore. Apparently, you paid them fourteen thousand dollars yesterday?"

"I can't talk right now, Bob."

"Jill, what's going on? We don't have fourteen thousand dollars. Please tell me you didn't do something stupid."

In the background, Bob heard Jill's boss saying: "Jill, there is a detective in my office. He wants to talk to you about the unauthorized money transfer yesterday."

"Bob, I think I'm going to be arrested."

"Don't say anything, I'll call our lawyer."




100 Word Dash writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story in just 100 words. If so, this is your opportunity to shine. The story can be about any subject you wish, creative approaches are of course encouraged. All stories must have the following: Main Character, Setting, Conflict, Resolution.

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A timely story for our times. With all the financial issues in the world, none are more urgent than the one's affecting our families.
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