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I am in my Space Jitney to revisit planet Neptune

A chapter in the book The Cyber Space Garden

Fire Piston Orchid

by Lynar


The poem is a space mind adventure


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I am on an outer space adventure, in my mind, to revisit the planet Neptune. There is a lot of earthly commotion going on, and this is how I take my break for peace. I hope you enjoy my mind trip, to
Ruby red center orchid
a staunch piston show of virility
Power with velvet petals, is a
beauty sublime in mind

In my eyes heavens' masterpiece;
to my nose, delight of infusion,
flowery vapors

The flowers of planet Neptune,
a serenity peace without drama

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Neptune is the eighth planet from the Sun. The blue color composition is by the absorption of red light from methane in the atmosphere. Artwork by Cleo 85 on FanArtReview.com For: Orchid. Humble Thanks.
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