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Music Magic

M in the Alphabet Soup

by Begin Again


"Class!" Ms. Jenson clapped her hands together, trying to be heard over the noise—yes, noise. This was her fifth year of teaching music — something she adored doing — but instead of sweet melodies, her ears ached from the off-key sounds.

The spring concert was two weeks away, and instead of sweet, happy notes of joyful melody, the room was filled with bickering children and flat notes. It was a mess. It was not the kind you could sweep up with a broom—this was a noisy mess, like a blender grinding and churning.

Every student was positive that they were the best and should be the one to stand out.

 Jordan, loud and confident, yelled, "Listen to me, Ms. Jenson. My mother says I sound like Louis Armstrong. I'm not sure who he is, but he must have been good." His lips pressed against the trumpet, and he blasted out the notes.

Mia removed her violin from beneath her chin and sneered at Jordan. "Maybe if you practiced, you could do something besides blow loud notes." She ran her bow across the violin strings with an angelic smile. "My mother says I play like Ms. Hahn. She's performed with many international orchestras."

Full of energy and constantly tapping something, Toby twirled his sticks between his fingers and rat-a-tat-tatted his own song, ending with a double clang to the cymbals. Triumphant, he smiled, "Now that's what you call music."

Layla sang so sweetly at church, but here in the music room, she was determined to out-sing the others, and often she was so loud that no one else could be heard.

And Max? He quietly sat behind the piano, his fingers dancing across the keys, but he felt no one noticed.

Ms. Jenson clapped her hands. "Enough!" But no one was listening—except to themselves, of course.

Later that day, she spoke to the principal. "I've tried everything," she sighed. "But they won't work together. I'm afraid I might have to cancel the spring concert."

It was a sad moment for everyone, but it was the only answer they could find.

*****

Later that night, instead of a peaceful music room, the instruments were arguing, each one playing its own song.

"I don't see what the problem is," said Trumpet. "Jordan's got the lungs and the moves. We're made to lead."

"Oh please," sighed Violin, her strings shimmering. "Mia is graceful and focused. Unlike some people, we know how to stay on pitch."

Drum thumped his side. "Toby's got rhythm!"

Flute huffed. "Layla's voice glides like air—I glide with her!"

Piano said nothingjust pressed one quiet key.

In the middle of the chaos came a soft, single ding. From the back wall, Triangle cleared her throat. "Maybe none of us are wrong," she said gently. "But none of us is right either."

The instruments stared.

"We're not meant to outshine each other," she whispered. "We're meant to play as one — a team."

The room fell silent. Then, softly, the Piano played a quiet chord. The drum followed with a steady beat. The trumpet sighed but added a mellow note. The violin hummed in. The flute played a soft, airy note. The triangle gave one perfect ding.

A melody filled the room. It wasn't noise. It was music.

*****

The following day, Ms. Jenson stood in front of the class. Her shoulders were heavy. "I'm sorry," she began, "but the concert—"

"Wait!" said Mia as she jumped to her feet. "The principal told my mother, and we don't want the concert to be canceled."

"Yeah," said Jordan. "We get it now."

"We don't want solos," said Layla. "We want harmony."

"We want to sound like music," Max added quietly.

They picked up their instruments. They breathed and played, together with all their heart.

The notes came together like puzzle pieces. The melody rose, the rhythm flowed, and the harmony drifted along.

Ms. Jenson's eyes glistened with pride. It wasn't just noise — it was music. The moment was magic.

*****

The night of the concert, when the stage lights glowed and the curtain rose, the audience didn't hear solos or show-offs. They heard a symphony—one sound, one group, one heart.

Because when they played togetherthat's when each of them shined. Together, they played as one big, beautiful song.



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