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A chapter in the book Oh Life!

Strike!

by Alcreator Litt Dear


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The Book of Poetry on True Experiences of Life in Living contains poems in different structures. It discovers the experiences, experimental and observatory feelings of life in diverse courses in dimen



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The Book of Poetry: Poems composed in different formats; poems on experiences of experimental living in dimensions





















Strike! See 'tis hot, right for a kick now,

Clock reminds; break your dreams.

Wind oft plays truant, blows dark signals,

Clouds sail witness silent,

They change colors in huge Blue Kingdom.





The Unseen Eye eyes you.

Silver, whitish lining woo if failed.

Keep time, kick dark; bring light.

Air plays flute, helps finding your foes.





Why wait? Sow, fruits may late.

What's yours' to lose? What you brought? Why off?





The sun enjoys right kiss.

Shaded moon peeps, pries your miss or kicks.

Birds, trees, hills, sky, good hearts pat you strike.

Let them sing, grab this time or drum fate.


















 



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Poetic licence used in use of words, expression, expression of meaning


Lesser punctuation is intentional


This poem is composed in my own, original styles, structure, form or format in 9-6-9-6-9-6-9-6-9-6-9-6-9-9-9 syllables with no rhymes or meters; truly I do not know the name of this form or format, however, I have composed this a free verse poem in my mind


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'tis = it is


oft = often

What's yours' to lose? = what is that you are going to lose / what are you going to lose / what is yours to lose / what is it that you are to ,lose / what is to lose



What you brought? = what you brought on birth





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The Book of Poetry: Poems composed in different formats; poems on experiences of experimental living in dimensions



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