General Fiction posted March 7, 2025


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My Love

by Bryce 1

There she is, laying out on the lawn. God if I had the guts to just walk up and say hi, I'd do it in a heartbeat. She is so beautiful, so perfect. I did talk to her once ya know? It was kind of in passing but we still had a little connection there. It was about something dumb though, like the weather or maybe tax season. I can't remember. But I do remember her eyes staring into mine. I don't know if she knew, but behind mine, I was absolutely fawning over her. God, I think I was in love with her right there. Do girls notice that? When a guy likes them? I've heard it said that a woman can pick up on everything a man is at any moment, as if they have some sixth sense. Hmm, do you think she knows I watch her?



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