Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted August 19, 2006 Chapters:  ...14 15 -16- 17... 


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A chapter in the book Oh Life!

Hungry?

by Alcreator Litt Dear


Who knows! It's a structured poem; rhyme is intentional; I know it is a free verse poem.


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The Book of Poetry on True Experiences of Life in Living contains poems in different structures. It discovers the experiences, experimental and observatory feelings of life in diverse courses in dimen
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The Book of Poetry: Poems composed in different formats; poems on experiences of experimental living in dimensions











Hungry? Natural
for survival, you must toil
work; birds, ants do all
















 



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This is an independent chapter 16 / 22 of the book



This is a free verse poem in 5-7-5 syllables


No, this is not a free verse poem contest entry


No, this free verse poem has no real or true rhymes; rhymes are intentional


Poetic licence used in expression of meaning, style and art of expression


Lesser punctuation is intentional


birds, ants do all = birds, ants work, all work, all feel hungry, it is natural


R you hungry?


Still, I'm hungry


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The Book of Poetry: Poems composed in different formats; poems on experiences of experimental living in dimensions


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