Romance Poetry posted December 17, 2024


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bad luck curse lasted 8 years

Broken Mirror Brings Bad Luck

by jake cosmos aller

One day in 1974

Two events happened

That changed my life.

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The first one

Was the dream

That haunted me

For eight years.

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An angel appeared

 in my dream

As I fell asleep in class

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And was the most

beautiful women

I had ever seen

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She messermized me

Hyptonized me

Bewitched me.

i had the love jones 

for her

as her love mojo

worked overtime on me.

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I knew that someday

We would find each other

And I would marry

The lady of my dreams.

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The second event

Was that I broke a mirror

Ushering in eight years

Of bad luck.

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That night I woke up

And broke the mirror

In the bathroom.

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I told my Mom about the mirror

But not about the dream.

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She said that

 I would have eight years

Of bad luck.

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And I did

Eight years later

She walked off the bus

Into my life.

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The greatest day of my life

I felt I had won the lottery

Hit the jackpot of love.

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And the bad luck

From the broken mirror

Faded away.




Mirror contest writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem concerning you, or someone, and a mirror. Make it humerous or serious; make it structured or free verse, but keep it brief. Use the mirror as a metaphor in anyway you desire.



Mirror contest

based on a true story,
Write a poem concerning you, or someone, and a mirror. Make it humerous or serious; make it structured or free verse, but keep it brief. Use the mirror as a metaphor in anyway you desire.
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