General Fiction posted December 14, 2024


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Watchful mailman

Unexpected Delivery

by Patty Mazzurco

Rachel had been scraping by, her rent overdue and no relief in sight. Then, a box appeared on her doorstep. Inside, she found stacks of cash, along with a note: “Don’t give up.” No name, no clue—just a lifeline. She didn’t know who sent it, but that surprise was the miracle she needed. The money gave her time, and the mystery gave her hope, reminding her that sometimes, help comes from the most unexpected places.

The mailman really delivered.




Surprise! 80 Words or Less writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a complete story in 80 words or less.

The theme is 'Surprise.'

You may incorporate this theme into the story any way you wish, but it must somehow relate to the topic.
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