Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted December 9, 2024


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gun Mondo about Gun Violence

Gun Mondo

by jake cosmos aller

do guns kill people?
do they create more gun ghosts?
do people even care at

guns do kill people
it is what they are designed
it is their buddha nature

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MONDO POEMS are a Japanese collaborative poetic form that comes from the ZEN practice of question-answer between master and student. BUT for this challenge one poet will write the question and answer. The theme is focus on a nature motif.

The Mondo Form:

FIRST, write the Zen Master question stanza 5/7/7 or 5/7/5 form

SECOND, write the student answer stanza 5/7/7 or 5/7/5 form

Club entry for the "MONDO POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
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