Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted December 6, 2024


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Life goes on, no matter where, no matter when

The Morning After

by estory

Newspapers bring
News of the world
While commuter trains
Carry the commuters
Off to their banks
And brokerage houses,
Offices up in the high rises,
Factories, fast food
And wi-fi hot spots,
While the weekend is swept up
From the gutters.
 
And yes, there's the rush hour
Making its frustrating way
Over the superhighways
As it has done for decades,
Charting a course by radio
Through the city that never sleeps.
 
Every Monday morning
It seems the world starts over again
And one sets off along with it
No matter where one came from
Or knowing where one is going,
Only that another night
Is the only certainty.
 
It seems the more things move
The more they stay the same,
Like the sun rising
And rising, day after day,
Out of the grey waters of Sheepshead Bay.



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This is a poem that I think celebrates the hopes and joys of life, its tenacity, in the face of monotony and the daily grind of the week in week out rat race. I thought some images of my home town, New York, would capture the look and feel of that monotonous grind. So we have here the references to the rush hour, the high rises, the endless rise and fall of the stock market, and the timeless waters of Sheepshead Bay, on the south shore of Brooklyn. All week long we seem to drag ourselves in the hope of the weekend, and then, after a brief respite, it's back to the endless grind. But on this long journey are the glimpses of light, the songs on the radio, the soaring architecture and the burgers and fries we cherish along the way. estory
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