General Fiction posted November 28, 2024


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A Night On The Town

The Story Gone Wrong

by Rick Gardner

Sam knew he was in trouble. He lost the car last night. Didn't know where it was. His father shouted "where is the damn car". Sam turned to face his father,  his father jump back, "what happened to your face". One side was torn up, "I don't know". I was on a date with Monica last night so I called her. She told me " you drank a lot, insisted on going to the party. The car is there. You puked and needed a bath, then fell face first from the top of the stairs". Story over.



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A night to forget.
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