Biographical Poetry posted November 23, 2024


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The highlights of the last day on the beach.

Last day in Spain

by Peter Mac

Sea shore,

want more.

Waves roar,

break ashore.

 

Wets shin,

jump in.

Salty skin,

big grin.

 

Splash about,

laugh, shout.

No doubt,

super bout.

 

Cozzie off,

don’t scoff.

Drip dry,

not shy.

 

Bucket, spade,

sandcastle made.

Sun pervades,

umbrella shades.

 

Ice lolly,

under brolly,

very jolly.

Oh, golly!

time’s done,

better run.

 

Great day,

must say,

Come again,

goodbye Spain.




A Couplet Story contest entry


The story of our last day in Spain, in July 1973.
Picture is of me on the beach (Castelldefels) next to the mirror dingy we took with us.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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