General Poetry posted November 19, 2024


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When there seems no way out

Four Seconds

by Coren McGirr

I stand at a cliff composed of fear.
Four, I say and wave to a tear.
Three, my last moment grows near.
Thoughts rush; nothing is clear.
There must be a way,
Other than down.
Two, I stop.
I must.
One.




Nonet Poetry Contest contest entry


This poem is about suicide. I want to make clear that I do not and have never had suicidal thoughts. This poem is not written from experience but out of empathy.
I decided to submit this piece to this contest because the topic fits the style of a Nonet so well.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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