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Modified Tanka (rules in my author notes)
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Tanka

~* Cold Moon *~

by Gypsy Blue Rose


presentation and poem created by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright @11/15/24

 

cold moon above

vast ocean below

     share a winter glow —

as my body aches with wistful awe 

and my soul bursts with love

 

 




Cold Moon on Dec. 15 = This is the month when the winter cold fastens its grip, and the nights become long and dark. moon calendar

Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed poem, but this modified tanka rhymes. Tanka is arranged in five lines. English tanka has 31 syllables or LESS because Japanese and English syllables differ. Tanka originated in the 6th century at the Japanese Imperial Court where lovers exchanged tanka poems for each other after a night of passionate lovemaking. With contemporary tanka the topic varies.
click here if you want to read modern tanka examples click here if you want to read modern tanka rules

Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. The presentation and poem created by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright @11/15/24

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