Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted November 10, 2024


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How much we need and how much we need to think

Less

by Coren McGirr

We truly need less,
        We think less than we need to.
Than we think we do.



5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry


I tried something new here. The first and last lines are a sentence, and in the middle is another sentence. I slid the middle verse to the right to have 'less' align with the first verse and 'think' align with the third verse.
I've never written a poem with a visual focus like this before, but I actually quite enjoyed tinkering with it.
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