General Poetry posted October 18, 2024


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Sun rise

Morning dash

by Jewell Hermann

From the hall, I spy
 
A sunrise sublime
 
I don my coat
 
Grab the camera
 
Hat atop 
 
Boots below 
 
Down the driveway
 
Past the trees 
 
Pictures took 
 
Wishing to be warm 
 
I head back in 
 
Leaving minus 8 for 62.
 




Constructive criticism highly appreciated, Positive comments are nice, but that's not all I want to see.
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