General Poetry posted October 12, 2024


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A heart-wrenching encounter on the prairie

Dogie

by Terry Reilly

            
            Adrift on the range

            pot-bellied early weanling,

            sad motherless calf




5-7-5 writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a 5-7-5 on any topic. A 5-7-5 is a poem with the following syllable count: First line has five syllables. Second line has seven. Third line has five.


A calf born prematurely whose mother died in childbirth or soon thereafter. Its immature digestive system was unable effectively to process the coarse prairie grass leading to excess gas in the stomach compartments and bowels, producing a distended abdomen. Even tough cowboys were often moved when they came across one of these unfortunate orphans.
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