General Poetry posted October 9, 2024


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A true tale of survival.

Love Hurts...

by Julie G1

Wife walked away,
Nothing left to say,
Not an excuse for love,
End of loving dove,
No chicks touched him, his woe,
Did not fade to shadow,
He prayed she would return,
His pleas she did spurn,
She did survive, 
Her gifts did thrive,
Silver grey, no strife,
Once she was a wife,
Love can hurt, okay,
Grand for some, I say......

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Writing Prompt
Write a poem about love gone wrong or lost love. It can be sad, raw, or just plain angry (Just keep it clean). Express the emotions of the darker side of love. Any style or length. Be creative.


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