General Poetry posted October 7, 2024


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This is about planting a field

Planting Anew

by Jewell Hermann

It was afternoon in my room
 
Thru the window came the voice 
 
Of my brother born before I
 
Asking me to try something new 
 
So I got to it
 
Leaving my room, grabbed my shoes 
 
Out the door 
 
Up the hill a little ways 
 
There it stood, in all it’s orange-painted beauty 
 
“Crank her up” my dad said
 
I obliged, it sputtered to life 
 
The exhaust rain cap did a little dance, letting the smoke come out 
 
I hopped on beside my dad 
 
Up the hill we went some more 
 
At the top, I got off to spot
 
Pin thru implement hitch, drawbar, hitch
 
Cotter key in pin
 
Out of the shed came my dad, bag of grain in his hands
 
As the grain poured out of the bag, I went to get another
 
Soon the hopper was filled 
 
So off we went to drill the field, me on the back, my dad steering it all 
 
“Put it down to 3”
 
My hands wrapped around the handles, left one gave way 
 
but right one put up a fight, sun shining down, I squeezed with all my might
 
Could I do it? It complied 
 
Depth set, furrow cutters down, chains of hooks 
 
Off we went, I checked for flow 
 
Peering around 
 
I saw seed falling down
 
Dark soil of furrows, accepting them
 
Around the field we went 
 
Past the outhouse, beside the high tunnel
 
Hopper cover opened, cones of air from where the grain goes out  
 
Looking out, I think ahead,
 
All those little seeds 
 
Weathering thru the winter 
 
To spring forth and flourish  
 
Last grain down the holes
 
 
Job done, grain drill unhitched 
 
Tractor in the shed 
 
Father and son walk down the hill
 
Dinner bell rings
 
I run down, in the door, wash my hands     
 
All seated, we hold hands and pray 
 
Now to eat something familiar, after doing new things 
 
On the table stands a pan, steam wafting out 
 
Being little, I can not see in, but I know baked beans reside   
 
Cornbread got, cut and buttered  
 
Big scoop of baked beans atop
 
That job wasn't half bad, and I did get beans after!
 
As I look back, I see a day of doing new things, squeezing thru, 
and flourishing in something new.  
 



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