General Poetry posted October 6, 2024


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This is about using a newly fixed apple press

Sealed

by Jewell Hermann

Fresh press
 
Crush, apples dropped 
 
Prize drips.
 



2-4-2 Poetry contest entry


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A Milestone Post


Constructive criticism highly appreciated, Positive comments are nice, but that's not all I want to see.
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