General Fiction posted October 6, 2024


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what goes down can come up again

inside the super bowl

by SimianSavant


 
It seemed like a good idea at the time.

Afterwards, I spritzed Poo-Pourri on the surface to ensure the next lucky visitor wouldn't catch a whiff of any stray bubbles emerging from my dropped motherload. What could go wrong?

I heard Great Aunt Millie's scream two minutes after the rest of us had moved onto our chocolate mouse. Little did I know that my former flushed friend had not fully flushed, and contained the precise balance of fatty ingredients from my recently abandoned Atkins diet to summon the toilet shark up from the sewer.

Next time, I'll bring an axe.



A Good Idea writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Start your story with the sentence:
It seemed like a good idea at the time.
*100 words max
*fiction or nonfiction
*any genre
*no poetry


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