General Poetry posted September 30, 2024


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I love the sea when it is calm

The Command

by Claire Tennant

The gentle waves bless
this is just a test
soothing as I stand
applauding God's hand

I realise the truth
as though in my youth
trusting Him is best
"Come to Me, and rest."



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