General Poetry posted September 26, 2024 Chapters:  ...8 9 -10- 11... 


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lost in a desert

A chapter in the book Valse de poèmes

Oasis Dream

by Sarah Probe S.

I'm beautiful but darkened, 

Darkened in the scorching sun,

Sun burning my golden skin,

Skin longing for thirst - quenching,

Thirst-quenching dream oasis, 

Oasis of heaven's peace,

Peace and silence just disturbed,

Disturbed by a birds concert,

Concerts singing, mind - lifting.


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