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Senryu (rules in my author notes)

A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Hanging Out

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

 

grandpa and grandson

   hanging out on the front porch —

some mornings … some nights

 

 

 
 
 
 




old - young > juxtaposition < morning - night > juxtaposition < birth - death<

SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo).
the haiku foundation senryu rules

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Gypsy

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