General Poetry posted September 25, 2024


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Russian Coryphees

by Patrick Bernardy

These dancers 
with their Cossack-maiden eyes
—glide, jump, spin— 
their heads held high, 
four chins jut out
with Slavic pride. 
 
     Arms like the turgid Volga, flow— 
          shapely legs stretch 
     on pointed toe. 
          Swan-neck curves
     in kind repose. 
 
Like Naga’s sabres
     in Crimean mists, 
hands spin precise 
     on writhing wrists— 
thumbs down,
up!
then finger-twists— 
fluid circles, 
         
          rapid pivots
                   
                   PLEADING FISTS!
 
     Pirouettes, lovely bends in line— 
     motion slowed
     in Siberian
     recline ...
     
     ... an icy fade in
     Tchaikovsky's
     time. 
     
     The foursome
     freezes: 
                   
... hushed with rime.



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"Coryphees" -- ballet dancers who dance in a small group instead of in the corps de ballet or as a soloist.

"Cossack" -- a member of any of a number of autonomous communities drawn from various ethnic and linguistic groups that formed in Ukraine, southern Russia, the Caucasus Mountains, and Siberia after about 1400.

"Slavic" -- a branch of the Indo-European language family containing Belarusian, Bulgarian, Czech, Polish, Serbian and Croatian, Slovene, Russian, and Ukrainian.

"Volga" -- 2293 miles-long river in Russia rising in the Valdai Hills and flowing into the Caspian Sea.

"Naga" -- a member of a race of spirits recognized in Hinduism and Buddhism that have mingled superhuman and serpent qualities, are genii of waters and rain, and live in a subaqueous kingdom.

"Crimea" -- peninsula in southeastern Europe extending into the Black Sea southwest of the Sea of Azov.

"Siberia" -- vast region of northern Asia chiefly in Russia extending from the Ural Mountains to the Pacific Ocean.

"Pyotr Ilich Tchaikovsky" -- Russian composer (1840-1893) known for the world-famous ballets "Swan Lake" and "The Nutcracker."
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