General Poetry posted September 10, 2024


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An abandonment and betrayal

Loss

by Jaysa Manning

  1. Do you know what abandonment looks like
  2. Let me show you so you can see the light
  3. You entered betrayal without remorse
  4. You took my will while using force
  5. You stained my brain, and my heart
  6. You torn my soul and passion apart
  7. Your explanations are excuses and pity in vain
  8. You saw my pleasure and replaced it with pain
  9. Do you know or understand what you did?
  10. You say that you do but left me to bid
  11. I will show you what you’ve shown me
  12. Maybe then I can finally be free

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