General Poetry posted September 7, 2024

Debi Pick Marquette

FanStory Recognized writer for July 2022.

I started writing poetry when I was 8 years old. In third grade I was inspired by Joyce Kilmer's poem called, "Trees."

Then when I married & started my family, I still loved to write, - more...

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For our Teri 7's Son, Jonathon's Birthday

Surprise for Jonathon and Gus

by Debi Pick Marquette


Both Jonathon and buddy, Gus

Will celebrate birthdays today

It's two for one, it's a big plus

Their "Old MacDonald" sing and play 


Gus is Jon's golden retriever 

He always loves to sing along

Has piano/guitar fever

Gus tries, but he gets the words wrong : )


So, Jonathon and Sha, his wife

And Greyson who's their only boy

Are thankful for their precious life

Together their pool time brings joy 


He owns a successful business 

His company, "King's Piano" 

In the back yard, he brings finesse 

To his recording studio


He loves his wife, Sha; she loves him

Spends time with brother, Jeremy

Plays Fort Nite with his brother, Tim

And Greyson is Jon's mini~me

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Your mom loves you and wants to say

She's so proud of you, Jonathon

She wishes you Happy Birthday 

Her forty six year ~ Awesome Son


And she will reminisce this morn

She says your hair was dark and long

Like lil Elvis when you were born

How she felt is in this first song

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2024

Photo Art is Sha, Greyson, and Jonathan - Make sure to read "Description" where it tells that this is for our own Teri 7's son and grand-dog, as she calls him.

I normally do not use near rhymes, but had to use piano and studio to get them in.

If you would like a tribute/birthday poem written, (makes no difference if you had one already or not) please PM me and let me know the date. I would be happy to do one for you or for one of your loved ones.

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For our Teri 7's Son, Jonathon's Birthday

Surprise for Jonathon and Gus

by Debi Pick Marquette

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