General Poetry posted August 31, 2024


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Love At First Taste

by jim vecchio

Love is a sickeningly sweet pastry

Extraordinarily glazed

With sticky, gooey icing

Oozing down past your lips

Staining heart and soul

Crusting, clinging

Transforming

What was

you



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