Humor Poetry posted August 29, 2024


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A Teikei-shi for the club

The Guy You Love to Hate

by Debi Pick Marquette


this guy thinks he's great


he will not communicate

 but loves to debate

 and if she'd been thinking straight

she'd have picked a better mate




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#94
August
2024


Teikei-shi is a rhymed Japanese poem, a rare form since most Japanese poetry is free verse. The first Chinese poems that appeared in Japan were classified as this type of poetry. The syllable count is 31 syllables or less in 5 lines with a 5-7-5-7-7 form.

Club entry for the "TEIKEI-SHI POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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