General Poetry posted August 30, 2024


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Should I go through with it?

Doubts (loop poem)

by jenintorre

It's time for my wedding now.
Now I have doubts. Cold feet.
Feet so uncomfortable in these shoes.
Shoes I chose because they were sweet.

Sweet, but a little bit tight.
Tight fit, yes they're killing me.
Me and my groom have also argued,
Argued loads, this won't work, I can see.

See all the people waiting.
Waiting for me to appear.
Appear in the church, no way.
Way too scary, I'm leaving here.

Here is not where I want to be now.
Now I'm completely filled with dread.
Dread and fear of this marriage.
Marriage sucks. I don' want to be wed!

 


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