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Senryu (rules in author notes)

A chapter in the book 2024 Japanese Poetry

Going for a Run

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 

mom tells chubby son

“you need to exercise!”

he runs with dinner's rice

 





SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo).
the haiku foundation senryu rules

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

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