General Poetry posted August 22, 2024


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The colour blue mixes with whispers of midnight.

Midnight Blues

by Tomisin👀

This shade of blue boasts of its might
 
when it ambushes dawn, purely out of spite.
 
Engulfs every nook and cranny, even the deepest seas
 
and millions of children
into an irrational unease...
 
 
This envious blue surrounds us all,
 
while monsters and terrors rise and fall...
 
Our skies shield us, its senseless sheep,
 
sending us home, to a state called sleep.
 
 
 
But beyond, the reckless see blue a puppeteer,
 
manipulating the ordinary like a poacher to deer!
 
As constellations, old crescent, dazzle in their full glory,
 
they shape every midnight event.Like an age-old story...



Color Series writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem with the theme being the color BLUE. The color can be literal, figurative, or a metaphor.


Hi! Any feedback is appreciated.Also, I'm struggling with a suitable title for my poem, so any suggestions are extremely helpful.
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