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Gogyohka Poem

A chapter in the book 2024 Japanese Poetry

See The Sun In Me

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

see the sun in me

shining  over the land and sea

as we jump into the river of life

and we breathe in the scent

of flowers and soil after the rain

 
 




Haiku, and other Japanese poetry, originated in Zen philosophy. A Zen concept is 'interbeing' - everything in nature and human beings are connected, thus 'the sun in me'.

Inspired by Buddhist Monk, Thich Nhat Hanh's poetry

Gogyohka is a five-line Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. You may use any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay. It usually doesn't rhyme, but natural not forced rhymes are okay. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe.
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Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. Poem and presentation created by Gypsy Blue Rose. I get a lot of questions about my presentations asking if i use a templet, I don't. I do all the artt work. COPYWRITE@2024
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