General Poetry posted August 9, 2024 Chapters:  ...57 58 -59- 60... 


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Contemporary Tanka (rules in my author notes)
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Tanka

The Winds of Change

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
 
rapid rivers race

  through raging turbulent waters—

aiming to unite as one

in the peaceful sea

amidst the winds of change
 
 
 
 



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Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed poem with 31 syllables arranged in five lines; English tanka is 31 syllables or LESS because Japanese and English syllables are different. Tanka originated in the 6th century at the Japanese Imperial Court where lovers exchanged tanka poems for each other after a night of passionate lovemaking. With contemporary tanka the topic varies.

Usually, the third line transitions from the descriptive and image-focused beginning lines into a reflective metaphor, simile, or personification for the closing lines. The subject matter varies, but most tanka are emotionally stirring or profound, and many are about love. click here if you want to read modern tanka examples === click here to read Tanka Society of America === click here if you want to read modern tanka rules

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Gypsy

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