General Poetry posted August 4, 2024


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A very short poem

The Sorrow of a Soldier*s Wife

by RodG

Oh, Love, I miss you so!

This unrelenting loneliness

  is lodged within

a hollow

deep inside.

 

My heart prickles

from an endless longing

while I am tormented

by the forlorn

tap-tapping

of the rain.

 

Darling, I pray

you’re safe.

May I see

you soon.




Lonely Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a free verse poem to express the state of loneliness in not more than 15 lines.


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