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Gogyohka Poem

A chapter in the book 2024 Japanese Poetry

The Old Priest and the Fly

by Gypsy Blue Rose


a little sarcastic humor

the old priest tried to nap

but a fly taunted him with a buzz

so he zapped it

    with his rolled-up sermon draft—

the fly didn’t see the light

 

 

 
 




Gogyohka is a five-line Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. You may use any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay. It usually doesn't rhyme, but natural not forced rhymes are okay. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe.
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