General Fiction posted July 16, 2024


Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Through the eyes of a child contest entry

The Wonder of a Child

by dovemarie


Wow! The snow falling down looks like dancers and cake frosting on the trees! When I look into the beach water, the sand and fishes are moving around from one place to another. I try to pick up a fish, but it slides away from my fingers. The stars in the sky look like tiny lights that I wish I could reach. I would like to turn on the lights the way Mommy turns on a light in my room. Rain splashes down on me like Mom pouring water over my head to wash my hair in the tub. The light from the sun feels like the heat in my bedroom on a cold winter day. All the world is like a playground when I run and play at recess in school. I love this place!



Through the eyes of a child writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a short story (100-500 words). The story must include a child's perspective of an object or situation. The story may be told from the viewpoint of the child, or an adult.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. dovemarie All rights reserved.
dovemarie has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.