General Poetry posted July 15, 2024


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Delete!

by Julie G1

Message for oldies,
Fair and fat, selfies delete!
Our faces look fat,
Lard butts expand, beyond gross,
Unhelpful,  to say the least! 



Tanka Poetry Contest contest entry


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