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Contemporary Tanka with Bookend lines
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Tanka

Thinking About You

by Gypsy Blue Rose


rules in my author notes

thinking about you … 

 
 

it’s good when you kiss me 

and it's good when put your hands 

   all over me—

let us slow down, my love

we can take all night

 

 

… I’ll wait by the creek

 





Contemporary Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed poem with 12 to 31 syllables arranged in five lines. The first poets who wrote tanka imitated the Japanese models of a 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic structure in five lines. This resulted in poems that were too long in comparison to Japanese tanka. The first tanka were padded or chopped to meet the fixed number of syllables. Additionally, the third line must transition from the descriptive and image-focused beginning lines into a reflective metaphor, simile, or personification for the closing lines. The subject matter varies, but most tanka are emotionally stirring or profound, and many are about love. click here if you want to read modern tanka examples === click here to read Tanka Society of America === click here if you want to read modern tanka rules
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