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Jisei Tanka (Death Poem)

A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Tanka

Cruel Dark Smoke

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
cruel dark smoke rises

from gas chambers' chimneys—

as souls ascend to heaven

leaving barren fields 

and river of tears behind
 




JISEI is a DEATH POEM - a genre of poetry developed in Japan. They tend to offer a reflection on death and a meaningful observation of life. It originates in Zen Buddhism. The poem's structure can be written in haiku 5/7/5 (17 syllables or less) or tanka 5/7/5/7/7 (31 syllables or less) forms. Death poems are typically emotional. Death is described metaphorically, with references such as barren fields and smoke. They tend to be dark. wikipedia
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"The SUPREME COURT ruled that the former president, and future presidents, have broad immunity from criminal prosecution for official acts. They didn't specify what OFFICIAL ACTS are." - Washington Post

There is a real possibility that democracy, as we know it, will not survive and we will have kings or dictators from the presidential election on. I pray we will continue to have freedom, a democracy, and a country of fair laws, with nobody above the law.

"We have a republic if we can keep it." - Benjamin Franklin

"Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it." - George Santayana

"When someone shows you who they are, believe them the first time." - Maya
Angelou

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

Picture: Auschwitz, 1940s, German concentration camp. click here for more information

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