General Poetry posted July 2, 2024 Chapters:  ...42 43 -44- 45... 


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Ekphrastic Tanka (rules in author notes)
A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Tanka

Field of Dreams

by Gypsy Blue Rose

her black raven hair

is tousled by southern winds 

    and her gown of flowers—

colors the meadow 

with a field of dreams

 

 




Tanka is a Japanese unrhymed poem having about 12 to 31 syllables usually arranged in five lines and read in about two breaths in length when read aloud. The first poets who wrote tanka imitated the Japanese models of a 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic structure in five lines. This resulted in poems that were too long in comparison to Japanese tanka. The first tanka were padded or chopped to meet the fixed number of syllables. Additionally, the third line must transition from the descriptive and image-focused beginning lines into a reflective metaphor, simile, or personification for the closing lines. The subject matter varies, but most tanka are emotionally stirring or profound, and many are about love. click here if you want to read modern tanka examples === click here to read Tanka Society of America === click here if you want to read modern tanka rules
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