Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted June 24, 2024 |
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How much is enough?
Greed
by Shanbreen
Rhyming Poetry Contest contest entry
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There is nothing wrong in shooting for the stars. The problem becomes a problem when we compare the price paid for achieving the never-ending goal. On the other hand, some people simply don't know what they have lost in obtaining what they have gained: "Why don't you love me for what I am?"
The first stanza is the relentless struggle the man goes through to achieve more.
The second stanza depicts how important it is for him to climb up, flaunting his achievements for others to admire.
The third stanza shows how nothing is enough for him. He bargains his health to achieve his never-ending goals. Yesterday always falls short of what today is to bring.
The fourth stanza shows how susceptible he is to media messages, forever wanting more.
The fifth stanza shows him trying to get divine help in his quest for more.
The sixth stanza is his first reckoning that something is missing in his life.
The seventh stanza is where enlightenment occurs as he lies dying on his bed, knowing it may be too late for him to obtain the right currency for love.
The last stanza shows the man changing course, blaming others (family and friends) for not loving him. He argues that he was always upfront with them---never a sham.
The image of gold nuggets is by Suzannethompson2. Thank you Suzanne.
Pays
one point
and 2 member cents. The first stanza is the relentless struggle the man goes through to achieve more.
The second stanza depicts how important it is for him to climb up, flaunting his achievements for others to admire.
The third stanza shows how nothing is enough for him. He bargains his health to achieve his never-ending goals. Yesterday always falls short of what today is to bring.
The fourth stanza shows how susceptible he is to media messages, forever wanting more.
The fifth stanza shows him trying to get divine help in his quest for more.
The sixth stanza is his first reckoning that something is missing in his life.
The seventh stanza is where enlightenment occurs as he lies dying on his bed, knowing it may be too late for him to obtain the right currency for love.
The last stanza shows the man changing course, blaming others (family and friends) for not loving him. He argues that he was always upfront with them---never a sham.
The image of gold nuggets is by Suzannethompson2. Thank you Suzanne.
Artwork by suzannethompson2 at FanArtReview.com
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