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Senryu (rules in my author notes)

A chapter in the book 2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Frustrated Painter

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

frustrated painter

   runs out of canvas to paint —

a child’s laughter

 





SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo). Classical senryu was humorous and sarcastic. With time, it has developed into a loser form with any theme.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poems.

Gypsy

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