Romance Poetry posted June 10, 2024 Chapters:  ...12 13 -14- 15... 


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A chapter in the book Valse de poèmes

Betrayal

by Sarah Probe S.

Between us and the skies, strong bridges I had built,

And I wanted us both to remain exclusive,

The world around us to be vanishing,

But you opened the doors to my secret garden,

You have let all of my enemies in,

All those demons have invaded my space,

You have let them all destroy my fortress.....




Betrayal Poetry Contest contest entry


portraying the devastating impact of lovers haters ( 7 verses of 12-12-10-12-10-10 )
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